My review of Unintended Consequences

rock_jock

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I just finished UC. I bought it based on the overwhelming recommendations on this board and anticipated a great read. Sorry to say I was nonetheless underwhelmed and unimpressed. I post this in case someone out there is thinking of blowing $30 on this sizable hunk of starched cellulose. My advice - don't! Spend it instead on a day at the range.

From a literary standpoint, the book is not very well written. Way too much unnecessary detail, a scattered storyline, and character development that is like white bread - adequate but unappetizing. An example: its not enough that we have to wade through a 80-plus year treatise on the history of conspiracy killings in the U.S., Ross then ends every chapter with an overt reference to how the events described will impact the future. It makes you want to scream "Enough already! We UNDERSTAND that the use of background material. Its called foreshadowing. Look it up. You don't have to spell it out for us on every other page." Oh, and did I mention the misspellings and grammatical errors? Never mind.

The central theme of the book is that armed revolt is at times an appropriate and necessary response when a government becomes dangerously abusive in its authority and borders on the tyrannical. That someone would actually explore this theme in a published book in our politically correct society itself makes the book especially appealing. However, like a pregnant woman at forty weeks, it fails to deliver. Although the book starts out with a fairly interesting story (but again, jumps around too much), by the time you get to the final 1/3, it begins to look like some piece of lurid pulp fiction that never quite made it to the editor's desk.

The main character, Henry Bowman, comes across as a well-intentioned (a little parody on the title?) but morally bankrupt gun enthusist inadvertantly drawn into a web of government deceit by an agency left to its own devices. He is forced to make some difficult choices, and the one he picks is nothing less than brutal.

Keep in mind that in a good novel, the reader should empathize with the protagonist, and maybe even admire him. However, while we could forgive Bowman's initial excesses, he goes overboard when he somehow equates using a lesbian stripper-whore to stage a homosexual orgy/murder scene with George Washington's crossing of the Delaware. At this point, I stopped caring what happened to him. He then goes so far as to urge other disenfranchised sociopaths to vent their frustration at overregulation by declaring open season on any and all government employees. Can you imagine the results of a such a scenario playing out on the American landscape? "Don't like ketchup standards set by the USDA? Kill the head of the local ag extension center." "Ticked off at Smokey Bear? Whack a forest ranger." "Tired of your mailman leaving the mailbox open? Rig it with a little C4." "They deserve it, they all deserve to die because they work for the government!"

At one point, the owner of a dry cleaning store spills chemicals on the ground, potentially leading to carcinogens in the groundwater and maybe even in your tap water. When the EPA tells him to clean it up, and his poorly-picked choice for an insurance company leaves him high and dry, he throws a tantrum in the form of a high-caliber rifle round fired in the head of the regional EPA director. This of course with Henry Bowman's indirect blessing. Our founding fathers would be so proud.

You think the story is really whacky by now, but wait, there's more to come. A super-rich laywer negotiates with a retired Supreme Court Justice (whom the the President briefly considers having tortured to death), a Holocaust survivor lures a BATF director into a death trap, and the President ends up granting amnesty on the rebels, and even declares them heros. Uh-huh. You get the feeling that the author get bored writing and decided one morning he was going to wrap up the unfinished work by lunch. The ending is the equivalent of having a herd of crazed gazelles stampede the main characters in a really bad Clive Cussler novel (which is a redundancy, BTW).

In summary, this book is a disappointment. Not so much for its literary faults, or resorting to gratuitous sex and profanity, or even for a lack of realism. Mainly its a disappointment because the idea had so much potential and John Ross, in my opinion, didn't capitalize on it. I was hoping for a tale of freedom-loving Americans rising up , drawing a line in the sand, and as a body declaring "This far, and no further!". Not a few angry individuals taking it upon themselves to commit wholesale murder, without accountability or commitment by the rest of us who cherish our rights. Maybe its just a difference in philosophy, but I don't think a country that has forged a claim to freedom through armed struggles led by dedicated men with strong moral fabric, supported by large contingents of liberty-loving citizens, and defined by lofty goals is well-served by terrorist cells instigating anarchic blood-baths.
 
It wasn't wholesale murder. It was self-defense, fighting for freedom and using the 2nd Amendment for its intended purpose of putting politicians back in their rightful place.

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John/az
"When freedom is at stake, your silence is not golden, it's yellow..." RKBA!
www.cphv.com
 
There are only two permissable types of self-defense involving lethal force:

1. To prevent an immediate threat to life or limb (or in some case property). This is the only one our law currently allows.

2. As part of an organized, cohesive effort sanctioned by a group of law-abiding citizens defending against government tyranny. For this case to be valid, the following criteria must be met:

- the group must have a legitimate claim of an aggregious and continuing long-term effort to violate or deny fundamental constitutional rights
- the group must be able to demonstrate how these rights have been deined and what effect they have had
- the group must have exhausted all efforts to seek redress through the existing system of law
- the group must represent a sizable minority to whom the violations
- the group must state their demands in a clear and concise fashion
- the group must have well-defined goals that are drafted and supported by members of the group
- the group must have well-defined guidelines (i.e., rules of engagement) by which armed conflict will take place and the members must adhere to these guidelines
- the target of the actions by the group must be limited to those individuals who have had a direct and responsible role in forming policy or enforcing the abusive system

There may a couple of others, but that's a good list. The founding fathers complied with all of these. Any armed revolt against any tyrannical government by any group of responsible people that hope to have any chance of success would follow all of these. Henry Bowman's group did not. They did not form a concensus with the majority of freedom-loving citizens. They acted on their own, according to their own rules, and they targeted some individuals that were in no way responsible for a violation of their fundamental Constitutional rights (sorry, but requiring people to clean up pollution that they are responsible for does not violate their Constitutional rights). This is not a righteous response; it is terrorism. And if this really occurred the way it is described in this book, the President would not knuckle under, the majority of freedom-loving gun-owners would not endorse the actions of Henry Bowman nd in fact would be appalled by them, he would lose and die in a big way, and any chance of forming a coalition of freedom-loving gun-owners to take up arms would be set back by several years, if not permanently.
 
Rock_jock:
I had many of the same reactions to this book as you did.
Yet the book has many appealing features and stories worth pondering.
I think it all goes haywire because of the heavy Ann Rand/Libertarian mental holes the author digs for himself.
Here is this monumental threat not only to Henry Bowman, but to the whole body of republican government as we know it.
But Henry Bowman cannot become the nucleus of a mighty citzen army that fights as long as it takes until victory is won because there can be no generals, majors, sargents and especially privates in his world. No, the whole thing has to be solved by 10 rugged individualists and one girl who will obey orders. They win because they are somehow smart and good and have neat gear as opposed to the other side which is evil and stupid enough to use MP-5's in Wyoming.
The ending is implausible and raises many ethical problems, but it is at least true to the author's ideals. How could it be any other way for Henry Bowman?
I actually liked the book, but its problems are interesting as well.
 
Herodotus,

I didn't hate the book, and in fact found the idea of politicians with a facist mindset getting their just desserts a rather amusing thought. I realize it is only a book, but when there is a limited library of fiction of this type, it becomes prominent and is often referenced. And, although at this point, our discussion is only academic, one day they may not be, and it is instructive to explore these thoughts.
 
Rock_jock, you said, <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>2. As part of an organized, cohesive effort sanctioned by a group of law-abiding citizens defending against government tyranny. For this case to be valid, the following criteria must be met:[/quote]

Academically, how is this to happen when "consipiracy" can be called upon for something as innocent as expressing one's self upon a photo of the president as a target?

I don't know if the numbers are correct, but it is said that "every third member of an organized militia is a federal agent".

Who would organize such a revolt? What color will the balloon be? Or do we just roll over and wet upon ourselves as more invasive legislation is passed or when another president creates new laws by by-passing congress, "stroke of the pen, law of the land! Pretty neat!" (inaccurate quote, but you get the jist?)

How much outrage was raised by the population concerning the gun dealer who rights to have an attorney present at the "complience check" were forciblely tabled?

Since when was it Constitutionally sanctioned to have a "complience check" for ANY business? Talk about invasive and controlling.

Am I eager to use my guns against the political maggotts that are feeding on America's carcass? Hell, no! But, I have to ask myself, "How much of our political and judicial system is more form than function? Look at the way a jury is chosen. They are screened and screened and screened and never told by the judge that they have the right to judge upon the evidence as well as the merit of the law that has been "broken". If ever one of them shows a modicum of intelligence he's excused as being "unfit" for jury duty!

Why doesn't the Supreme Court rule on a 2nd Amendment case? If they have to admit that years of rules and regulations are unconstitutional... well, that would be highly embarrassing, and all those laws and regulation would have to be scrapped along with a few alphabet agencies. So the hypocracy grows into a big Pandora's Box, and it sucks the life from our freedom as we watch it die with helpless rage.

Do we really retain that much control any longer over our government, or is it already self-perpetuating and are we just blindly responding to the smoke and mirrors held before us?"

The majority of these politician need a serious wake-up call, and if it does not come soon in a non-violent way, the phone may be red before they can pick it up.

Regards,

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John/az
"When freedom is at stake, your silence is not golden, it's yellow..." RKBA!
www.cphv.com

[This message has been edited by John/az2 (edited June 01, 2000).]
 
Rock jock,

I am a libertarian and an admirer of Ayn Rand to a greater or lesser degree. I have no problems with generals and such. However, the sense I got of Bowman's strategy was more in the mode of David versus Goliath or perhaps Gideon's band. The problem was that conventional military tactics would promptly get them stomped. With the acquisition of the ATF laptop conveniently filled with the names and addresses of all the agents, the paradigm changed. It was more than a band of ten men and one lesbian whore as there was a grass roots effort snowballing. (To digress a bit, as I remember, the woman in question had a very good reason for her sexual orientation given being abducted to serve as a sex slave and also where did the whore thingie come from? I don't recall her charging...) John Ross came up with a fairly innovative way of organizing resistance.


In WWII, many women were forced into prostitution by the Nazis. Had "field whore" branded or tatooed above their breasts. Some of these women, especially ones in the officers' field brothels, voluntarily allowed themselves to be infected with syphilis to infect the Germans. Would you, at this point, cease to care about what happened to them?

Tell me this. In Henry Bowman's shoes, what would you have done in the middle of the night when the ATF came around, dressed in black, breaking in with no attempt to follow legal process? Would you have resisted? If so, what would have been your plan after discovering you had killed an ATF team?
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Byron Quick



[This message has been edited by Spartacus (edited June 01, 2000).]
 
Oh, and with regards to your list of prerequisites for armed resistance. Read about the actions of the Sons of Liberty.

The Loyalists who stayed the course lost everything they owned in the colonies after the Revolution.

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Byron Quick
 
Since AG Reilly outlawed the sale of new semi-auto hand guns in the PRM, approximately 300,000 _more_ used handguns than would have been sold, have been sold. When people see that soemthing is being taken away from them, they over-compensate.

Hee hee.

Unintended consequences for sure.
 
Well first I agree, I could have done without the kinky sex portions of the book,
but to complain beacuse the book is brutal? Hey if gun owners actually have the needed levels of guts and dedication to fight it will be brutal. We shall be forced to go with the cell type structure of leaderless resistance.
As to the making of war on all government employees, that wasn't called for or done. The agencies singled out for attention in the book are overbearing, hamfisted and generally unconstitutional in nature. Your comments about the EPA for instance lead me to believe that you may think they are a swell bunch of folks.Their so called enforcement agents carry guns, have Kill Teams,er SWAT teams, and generally are no better than any other federal whore with a badge.As to the killing of the Schumer like character, hey you do what ever , however, to whom ever of your enemies you can.That's onre thing gun owners must get through their heads these folks aren't worthy opponets but enemies to be destroyed, politically for now, who what for later.Personally I would like to wire the about 2/3 of the federal government for sound myself as they seem to think they are there for me to act as a beast of burden for them.
As to Bowman being a whacked out, I know people that if they had the net worth of the character in the book they could be him. Guess what they love their families and friends, and they love liberty.
As to it being a small group of people, well I expect that is how it really will be. I hope at least 10% of us fight back, but conventional tactics will just get us killed. We will have to operate in small groups, using assignation and destruction of key choke points and facilities to be successful. At this point I agree with Claire Wolfe , it ain't exactly time to shoot the Ba**ards yet but is coming like an express train down the tracks. What kills me is most people I see still see this as a winable political issue. It's not, the sheeple, those people who don't care as long as the cable works, there's food on the table, and the check gets to the bank or mailbox on time are now in the majority. We've lost the political battle and I fear we will lose the war because of the timind nature of most gunowners souls.
The book had some good ideas on organization and a few good ideas on tactics.
It also gave a fairly decent of the history of the gun culture. I wouldn't rate it a 10 but it damn sure isn't the bad read you make it out to be. Sermon over.
 
I loved the book personally. Could've done without the sex, but I'm an adult, and can handle it. For everyone that is squeamish and thinks of Bowman's tactics as pure murder:

What do you call it when someone takes your money to fight drugs, pay welfare, bomb aspirin factories etc, etc, and then would have you disarmed and powerless to live at their mercy?

That's SLAVERY folks. We are not animals that need to be controlled. If you want to call it murder for the enslaved to throw off their captors, well, a rose by any other name...

I do have a question, though. Who was the woman who was assasinated in Arkansas in the book? I'm sure it was a reference to Clinton, considering the state, but I couldn't figure out who it was. Little help?

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Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery?
 
I do not like the book as a whole. However, I am now reading selected chapters from it to my mother, along with bits of Menicken, Heinlein. She's been reading Rand. No surprise that my Buckmark .22 is in her posession :)

I agree that UC is poorly written, too long and has annoying details. However, just as with Cracking the Liberty Bell, it is a needed book which might set people thinking.

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Oleg "peacemonger" Volk

http://dd-b.net/RKBA
 
Well, I knew this thread would generate some strongly felt responses, and that is good. To answer some questions, I offer the following:

- Henry Bowman's female accomplice considered becoming a paid mistress for a man, and even though she didn't carry through, the intent was there. Second, she got paid by 5 different men to have sex for the purpose of procurring bodily fluids. Being paid to have sex is the definition of a whore. And no, she was not forced to do anything that she did as part of the "retribution" against politicians, so I don't think the comparison to forced prostitution is valid.

- Your comment about the EPA is way off base. As a matter of fact, I am very familiar with the EPA, much more so than you are since I am an environmental engineer and routinely represent industrial clients slapped with unreasonable violations. I have met with many EPA employees over the years and have never encountered one that carries a gun. I know that they have an enforcement branch with a so-called SWAT team, but in the case presented in UC, the store owner was not roughed up and he was not faced with armed stormtroopers. He was required to clean up his property to prevent potential damage to natural resources. Now, we can argue over the degree to which the federal government should have the authority to set consistent standards for allowable levels of cancer-causing chemicals to exist in the environment, including your drinking water, blah, blah, blah, but you are not going to convince me that this man's fundamental Constitutional rights were violated. He was angry at a federal bureaucracy that we all can agree has gone too far. But if you think a justifiable response in a theoretical armed conflict is to wipe out every federal employee you see, I think you are way off base.

- I am not naive about the brutality of warfare. I am however, appalled at actions that include the killing of people not directly responsible for legislating facist policy or implementing it by means of force. If you can justify that, tell me how you can justify the killing of the wife and three children of an ATF agent? Look it up - its in the book. Are their deaths simply collateral damage? What were the rebels so angry at? Wasn't it for things like the ATF beating up a pregnant woman until she miscarried? So what do they do? Kill three innocent children. My friend, that in not an anomaly in the book, it proves my point, which is, when you have people running around exacting their own form of retribution on whomever they please, that is not rebellion, it is anarchy.

- I never said small-group TACTICS would not work, I stated that there must be a general concensus among the law-abiding gun-abiding community about what needs to be done. Let me give you a theoretical situation: a bill comes before Congress and is defeated. Shortly thereafter you and I are engaged in a conflict with the federal govt. You are operating with your friends doing whatever you think is right to "advance the cause", and I am doing the same. We both, for whatever reasons, have oppsing viewpoints on the bill and think it was an example of unwarranted govt. intrusion to opppose/support the bill. Our respective elected officials voted differently. So, you are angry and go whack your elected offical and I do the same. What has that accomplished? Before you know it, you and I may be so far off following our own objectives that those objectives come into conflict and we end up turning on each other

- Finally, to answer the big question, at what point has the line been crossed? At what point have we reached the point of no return? At what point do we excercise the "last resort option" for which the 2nd Amendment was designed in a worst-case scenario? The answer is, I don't know. This is something that we have faced in this country only twice - the Revolutionary War and the Civil War. I do feel confident, however, that if this ever does take place, it will be preceded by discussions of the type you and I are having now, but on a much larger, perhaps national scale involving the majority of law-abiding, freedom-loving Americans. You will see conservative columnists and commentators discussing the idea that those in power and the govt. in general has far exceeded its authority and that it may be too late to remedy the problem under the existing system. You will begin to hear and read about people with at least a modicum of influence suggest peaceful non-compliance. You will begin to hear some politicians (albeit, a very small number) rail loudly and continually about the dreadful consequences of what may occur if changes are not made. And, finally, you will see people openly discussing the issue of armed conflict, if only on an academic level at first. The point is, there will be signs. And I would caution folks that just because you don't find some conservatives in the media or politicians crying for action now, right this instant, doesn't mean that they don't understand or have strong convictions about the Constitution. They may just believe, as Churchill did that America is like a sleeping lion, slow to awake, but devouring when it does.
 
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